Nice guitar work indeed, reminds me a little of Jeff Beck.
Just 1 small nit. Both versions seem to end abruptly.
Personal preferrence for me is to look at the outro as the aftertaste of a great meal. That last forkful provides the memory.
You might want to consider fading over a couple more bars, or crash out to resolve.
Great job.


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For me there’s no better place in the band than to have one leg in the harmony world and the other in the percussive. Thank you Paul Tutmarc and Leo Fender.