John, I love the arrangement - it's beautiful. Your voice sounds great too. On your lyrics - in addition to the one Noel pointed out - if you change your knees to our knees and your cries to our cries it will flow much better with we hear but we don't listen.... Just my two cents. grin. I enjoyed the song very much. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Btw, it's true that most co-write and it can be easier and quite fun if you find the right person. But Diane Warren one of the if not the most successful hit songwriter ever prefers to write alone - so it works just fine for some people. grin.

Last edited by Sundance; 09/26/10 11:39 PM.