Hi John,

What can I say? Well performed and well produced! Very nice song. I liked it.

But I have to agree on Shockwave199 regarding the message and the way you composed the lyrics. It is kind of hard for me to keep track of the story you want to tell. Of-course this comment is only relevant if the rest of the song and production has a high and professional level.

Let me tell you the comment IS relevant!

Very good job. Keep 'em coming.