Hi Bob,

This is truly outstanding in every sense! The thing that really grabbed me was that you went straight into the vocals without any intro. This technique has been used by some of the most powerful and memorable songs I've ever known: for example "Hey Jude" - The Beatles; "American Trilogy" - Elvis Presley). My all-time favorite that uses this technique, though, is Dolly Parton's "Hello God" that she wrote in the wake of September 11. Here's a link to Dolly's song if you don't know it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vif3DjNm5...&playnext=1

You've written a terrific song, Bob. You've definitely got a fan in me

All the best,
Noel

P.S. Congratulations on "Wine and Liquor", too. You sure deserve the success.


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