Eric,

I like this one MUCH better than the other one. (This one didn’t depress me). Could you bring the vocals a little more forward? Maybe post the lyrics?

How much of the guitars are you playing? I like it. Kinda reminds me of Heart, and that’s a good thing.

You’ve obviously got a thing for long songs, (6 min on this one). I’d shoot for 3-1/2 to 4 minutes and leave the listener wanting more.

Overall, a very good job. Thanks for sharing.