Hi, Tano -

I enjoyed the song, but had a couple of niggles.

I agree with Steve that the electric keyboard seems to be a little off-beat.

When you start the verse, either you or the accompaniment is off-beat a little: it doesn't sound like you get into your groove until about the 2nd live of the verse. Line up the beat and it will sound great. Your vocal sound wonderful in the song, it just seems a little off the beat as each verse starts.

I hope that made sense. It's a great song, though.


John

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