Hi Alyn,
wow! this one is very cool.
It has a very timid and intimate atmosphere, mainly due to your vocals which are your best so far I think.
Like ROG suggested, they could be slightly louder in the mix.
Very original, and very good use of Biab, as always.
Rob
Thank you, I tried to portray the "silence" in the club; no one spoke loud, there was background classical music sometimes but that was almost subliminal as it did not affect the conversations.
One felt one had to speak in impeccable Queen's English and as one had an East London/cockney accent, at the time one sounded like Dick Van Dyke in Mary Poppins,

guv, me ole sparrer.
I shall increase the vocals a bit
thanks for listening
Alyn