Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
Mr jane, welcome to the forums!

For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done.

The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store?

At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

smile smile smile smile

Thanks for the Welcome! And the Laugh! And the nice sentiment!...



Originally Posted By: tommyad
Originally Posted By: HearToLearn


At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)
Carron, That thar is Funny!!! I’m still laughing, Tom


Ditto.



Originally Posted By: Phil Babylon
Great.
I wish I could get within an inch of your production.
Loved every second of it!



Thanks, Phil. I'd say you have a pretty good handle on things yourself...