Awesome song Floyd. Good story well put together
Thanks for stopping by, Graham..
One of the best song I've heard on this forum. Gorgeous ballad with dark mood, excellent production with nice details. Reminds me of The Gunman by Prefab Sprout, maybe all song about men with guns sound bit similar

Janne
Janne - I appreciate you having a listen. I've never heard of Prefab Sprout - it was interesting to listen to The Gunman... we did use similar methods for a number of things...
This is pretty sweet on my cheap speakers... I mean after all.... it's got a tremolo guitar....
I will check this out on cans later.
Really nice lyric writing and I loved the twist in the plot at the end. Everyone eventually meets someone better. Ironic that is was his own son.
Well done my friend.
Thanks, Herb. Glad you enjoy this...