Tano,

Your suggestions are spot on . . . and actually, it’s what I was shooting for. I’ve been guilty in the past of not being patient with the build and throwing too much out at once. So here, I started with piano and bass in the intro, introduced drums in the first verse, rhythm guitar in the second verse, harmonies in the second chorus, additional harmony in the bridge, and strings in the last chorus. So the intent was there, but my mixing skills are the challenge. Not sure I’ve made it better in the Version Number Three, but the link above should take you there.

Appreciate the comments immensely.

All the best,

Deej