Thanks guys for all the feed back. There have been six or seven versions of this in the process of trying to develop the song. In some ways I like the latest version and in some ways I like the more striped down version.

I had a friend of mine do a drum part live but I did not like it much. I will have to create one myself.

Everything has become too over driven. I don't have a studio where I can play guitar through a amp of the type I need to get the sound I am looking for.

Using VST's just will not work the way I want.

I added a couple of verses and created a ending of sorts with the vocal. I still need to cut four measures out of the intro but that does not really change anything much. Longer intros give some space to get everything working right when playing live.

Thanks to everyone again for all the feed back. It is really good to read what others think and consider what they are saying.

Some where near a final...lol

https://soundcloud.com/planobillydfw/cyber-space-final3

Thanks,

Billy

“Amazing! I’ll be working with Jaco Pastorius, Charlie Parker, Art Tatum, and Buddy Rich, and you’re telling me it’s not that great of a gig?
“Well…” Saint Peter, hesitated, “God’s got this girlfriend who thinks she can sing…”