Originally Posted by Alexander Paul
The pacing and style of your vocals really fit this track!
Thank You, Alexander.

Originally Posted by PeterF
Marty
Excellent song , lovely bass and great guitar by Dave.
Really well done.

Peter
Thank you, Peter.

Originally Posted by rayc
Dave's guitar sounds as sad as your vocal.
Sad story, great melody and a very cool band.I like the way the chorus swings, (helped by the marimba), with a walking bass and the verse bass leaves little holes, pauses and leaps.
Really cool.
Thanks, Ray. The saddest part is that it's fictional. We were never as a whole helpful toward all.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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