you have a talent no doubt but I have to agree with Ian that verses bridge and chorus seemed a bit "samey"! (Brit word).I would try and listen to country songs in the same vein as your song and perhaps use similar (It aint stealing) arrangements of their bridges and choruses to lift future songs you might write maybe even for this song.Cheers Frankie


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