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#239293 - 02/09/14 02:51 PM
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Re: Inside Out
[Re: floyd jane]
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Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 4746
Loc: Florida
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Bob - I'm tryin'... you might want to hold off a while before that release... Dylan just released a box set - Volume 1 - of "the complete albums set" - it contains 47 discs.... given time, we may be able to beat that!!!!We're on it, son.  Pre-orders are now being accepted for the 2014 Floyd jane Dual CD “Floyd jane – A Man And His Music” boxed set! Yes, Floyd jane, the acclaimed International Recording Artist, available for your personal listening pleasure! Also, if you order early, you will receive an 8X10 Glossy photograph, autographed by Floyd jane hisself!  Don't miss out, yall – order today! Send $40.00 (In Cash) to: Floyd jane Boxed Set PO Box 376 Swamp Possum, Ar. 63245
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#239632 - 02/12/14 01:02 PM
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Re: Inside Out
[Re: floyd jane]
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Expert
Registered: 06/17/10
Posts: 1661
Loc: Canyon Lake, TX
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Floyd,
I have been out of commission for several weeks, and my time is very short today, but when I saw your song post, I had to listen. I'm sure glad I did. You know I am a fan of your work, and this one is just another good one to add the the list! Great chorus. Love the turn of the words, inside out.
Really enjoyed it!
Steve
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Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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#239927 - 02/15/14 06:18 AM
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Re: Inside Out
[Re: floyd jane]
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Registered: 10/31/08
Posts: 13668
Loc: Australia
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Hey floyd, I've been listening to "Inside Out" just about every time I wander around Users Showcase. Twenty or so listens later, it's still sounds fresh and makes me smile. The only difference is that I can now sing a long with you, American accent and all  So, what do I like ... 1. Introduction The 4/4 bar followed by a 2/4 bar of drums alone is just great at setting the mood. Upbeat and happy, and the mixed time signatures throw the listener a little out of kilter because they are not what's expected. As you've show us many times in your songs, there's nothing quite like disrupting 'what's expected' to set the emotional tone. 2. Verses I laughed out loud at "i salted my coffee, i sugared my eggs, now they're scrambled and a little too sweet". That's such a good image! What stood out to me most in the verses is how you used rhyme to close a section. By this, I mean that the first 4 lines of each verse is essentially a single thought and that thought cleanly closes when line 4 rhymes with line 2. Then lines 5 to 8 begin a new lyrical thought. While that second lyrical thought also closes equally strongly with rhyme, musically you leave the 8th line wide open so that it drives home into the chorus. Nice! 3. Chorus That aaabba rhyme scheme is awesome! And the pay-off of twisting the interpretation of 'inside out' around, well, that's classic floyd jane creativity that's a signature in so many of your songs. In "Inside Out", it's also a terrific pay-off. 4. Writing Melody, lyrics and chord progression are incredibly well matched. 5. Arrangement When I listened from the perspective of arrangement, words that sprang to mind were "thoughtful", "oooo, that's clever", "great use of musical sweeteners and spices", "this could SHOULD be on the radio". 6. Performance For me, the believability factor of these lyrics clocks in at 100%. The singer (as the song's main character) is incredibly easy to visualise and to feel empathy with. He's a really likeable person. The combination of melody, lyrics and your singing makes all this possible in such a professionally seamless way. Ok ... it's back for another listen now .... All the best, Noel
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LINKS TO MY BIAB/RB SONGS
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#240022 - 02/15/14 04:19 PM
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Re: Inside Out
[Re: floyd jane]
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Enthusiast
Registered: 12/07/12
Posts: 64
Loc: Livermore, Ca
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I'll join the lovefest and just say how much I enjoyed this one. The only nitpick I have (and I hope you don't mind) is while the piano lead fit well into the song I felt it didn't sit quite so well into the mix. Sorry that gives you a lower score of 9.9999998. (I'm really into the Olympics right now LOL). A really nice effort bringing this one to life. As always I stand in awe of your talents my friend.
Rick
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#240082 - 02/16/14 08:22 AM
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Re: Inside Out
[Re: floyd jane]
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Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 6249
Loc: Florida
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Rick - thanks for the spin. Don't mind other's opinions at all - always good to take a look at something that doesn't quite sit right for anyone - regardless of what aspect. I fully understand your feeling on the piano lead (I assume you mean the solo before the last chorus). It did take a little extra work to get it to sit where it does. For me, it sounds like it fits/blends at the beginning, but then towards the end, it gets very bright and pops out - so that going back "out" of the solo feels like it "blends" less well... I could use an EQ envelope to adjust that part of the applied EQ - so that's something to have a look at going back to this... Thanks. 9.9999998 - dang! another miss!
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User Tip - Band-in-a-Box® to Reaper: The Basics
Train Your Brain with Band-in-a-Box®
National Train Your Brain Day is October 13th!
Open your Band-in-a-Box® program, and you'll find the [Practice] button in the toolbar - it's a GREAT resource!
Minimized your toolbar? Head to Window | Practice Window or ALT SHIFT L to access
In this window, you'll find many options to help you practice, including Ear Training games, access to the Chord Builder and Chord Subs, some helpful tools within the Playalong Features menu, and more!
Train Your Brain with Band-in-a-Box® today!
Band-in-a-Box Patch Updates - #TechTuesday
Visit our Patches & Updates page, and you will see that with every version released, there are 2+ patch updates applied to that version.
Patch updates are important, and should definitely be installed to your BB folder. They can add new features, update the help resources of the program, fix bugs reported by users, and make your entire Band-in-a-Box experience run smoothly!
Band-in-a-Box update options can be adjusted within the program too - within Band-in-a-Box for Mac, head to Band-in-a-Box | Check for Updates | and then you can select to automatically check for updates by however many days you choose!
Xtra Styles PAK 5 Contest - Listen to All the Entries!
Our Xtra Styles PAK 5 Contest is over, and the winners have been announced - congratulations again to forum users fiddler2007, rodipoet, Will Josef, and Ezekiel's Storm!
And, a BIG thank you to everyone who entered their songs on our contest - WOW what a great list of songs! We've arranged all the song entries into one simple list, if you'd like to listen to all the entries click here.
Congratulations Xtra Styles PAK 5 Song Contest Winners!
Thank you again to everyone who submitted their songs to our Xtra Styles PAK 5 Song Contest - 59 entries in total!
As always, we were blown away with every song entered! We truly enjoy listening to what everyone comes up with using Band-in-a-Box!
Our judging team listened to all the songs, and choosing the winners wasn't easy... some of the things taken into consideration were the quality of the composition, Xtra styles used, use of program features within the song, and originality - and we're now ready to announce the winners!
The Winners are:
Country:
I Will Be Your Doggie Listen to the song here
Artist/Forum User: fiddler2007
Xtra Style used: _WILDONE
Original Forum Post
Jazz:
Wie zingt verjaagt zijn pijn (He who sings expels his pain) Listen to the song here
Artist/Forum User: rodipoet
Xtra Styles Used: _SILKY
Original Forum Post
MIDI:
Child of the 70s Listen to the song here
Artist/Forum User: Will Josef
Xtra Style Used: HORIZON
Original Forum Post
Rock-Pop:
Hide it Away Listen to the song here
Artist/Forum User: Ezekiel's Storm
Xtra Style used: _CHEATED
Original Forum Post
Congratulations everyone!
Band-in-a-Box® 2018 for Windows: Making Songs
Visit Chapter 6: Making Songs in our online Band-in-a-Box 2018 for Windows User's Guide, and you'll learn (or be reminded of) all the different steps you could take for creating your own song using Band-in-a-Box®!
Learn about naming your song, choosing a key, setting the tempo, chord entry, and more! There's even information for more advanced use! Read about Song Settings (endings, tags, style variations, pushes, rests, and chord embellishments), Part Markers, Substyles, Song Form, applying Styles, using RealTrack/RealDrums, importing MIDI, and chord entry - just to name a few!
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