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#433930 - 10/17/17 10:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
Scott C Offline
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Very cool lyric Well done
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#434006 - 10/17/17 09:33 PM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Scott C]
Belladonna Offline
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Registered: 09/09/17
Posts: 103
Loc: Virginia
Thanks Scott. Looking forward to seeing everyone's work here.

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#434033 - 10/18/17 07:01 AM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
floyd jane Offline
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Registered: 08/10/12
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Loc: Florida
Belladonna,

Nicely done. A good story song. The harmonies are nice. The simple production is effective.

fj
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#434045 - 10/18/17 09:15 AM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: floyd jane]
Belladonna Offline
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Registered: 09/09/17
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Loc: Virginia
Thanks everyone.

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#434223 - 10/19/17 10:50 AM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
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Registered: 11/19/12
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Loc: Middletown, PA.

Dreams burn like a fire
Fleeting passions and desires
In the end what’s remembered
Is cold ashes and cinders
From playin’ with fool's gold

Killer Chorus!

very strong writing

enjoyed the listen,

Kenny

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#434261 - 10/19/17 01:49 PM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
Ember - PG Music Offline
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Registered: 06/19/17
Posts: 361
Loc: Victoria, BC
I don't think I've seen your posts on the forum much yet! In-case I haven't welcomed you yet, welcome Belladonna! I am really curious about the story behind this one, if there is one, as the lyrics are quite poetic.

Thanks for the share!
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#434366 - 10/20/17 09:33 AM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Robertkc]
RnAM Offline
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Loc: The Netherlands
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
I enjoyed this deeply considered song - there are some great lines in the sad story!
I`m glad you are finding support for your BiaB journey and that you are sharing your work here.

Robert


We agree with Robert, and we are very curious about your future songs!
Well done.

Rob & Anne-Marie
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#435511 - 10/27/17 12:36 PM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
bluage Offline
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Registered: 12/10/09
Posts: 390
Loc: Washington State
Dear Ms. "Belladonna"...

If that was your voice I heard singing the lyrics to "Playin' With Fool's Gold", I would say it was the best thing about the song, aside from the beautifully introspective lyrics.

Such densely-woven poetry needs a clear, unaffectedly emotive singing voice to draw a listener into its layered mysteries. Your voice possesses those qualities.

In my opinion, the best written lyrics always have a "beating heart", a line or two of words that capture, crystallize and project the essence, or the truth of what the lyrics "are about":

"A woman not strong enough to rise above
A man whose heart’s devoid of love"


That surely could be the clearest description of what the essential problem is in male/female relationships, generally speaking.

LOREN
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#435527 - 10/27/17 02:24 PM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
Rob4580 Offline
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Registered: 01/28/12
Posts: 1890
Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia
Hi Bella. This works well.
Thanks for listing.
Rob

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#436237 - 11/01/17 06:01 PM [User Showcase] Re: Playin' with Fool's Gold [Re: Belladonna]
Greg Johnson Offline
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Registered: 12/21/13
Posts: 3683
Loc: Davis, CA
Some very cool writing here!! Great images-very moving. I would try to have a bit more of a motif in the verse music. Also, I think the vocal has too much reverb-a little soupy. Nicely done song!! Take care. Greg

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