Bob,

A cool rhythm to this one. There is both a simplicity and complexity to the lyric. That's cool. The organ works really well (I thought it should have hit right at the beginning of the chorus - since you did not bring drums in there). The harmony is pretty low. I think having it more "an equal partner" in this chorus would work well - it's a cool chorus.

The drums sound great! I've always felt that the songs you write beg to be driven HARD by the drums - to really rock! And this one heads that direction! And paired with the organ... it's a great combination. You've got the type of voice that can really carry that type of production (I'd like to see you drive those drums even more, actually).

Was sort of hoping you would end by bringing in a screaming electric lead...

I really enjoyed this. Definitely my favorite...

floyd

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