Shigeki Adachi,
very nice melodic composition. Reminds me of popular French songs of 60s-70s. Obviously played live is a much better version, especially with beautiful Kiana's vocals, however BIAB was a very good starting point. It is nice of you to include both versions to compare. Enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Misha.

P.S. Comments... I think ending could be slightly longer - just instruments.