Hi, Rob.

I enjoyed the song a lot. Nice write, good production and singing - the harmony is really nice.

Some small nits: The vocals seemed a bit overwhelmed by the instruments at time, and the fade was a bit abrupt.

You've got a number of lines that feel forced:

I lean against the door frame on my tears I choke.
No longer a two step glides cross the floor.
Banter and laughter now seem so surreal
No sign of a large crowd whose Sunday best wore

But that's a personal preference, so... not really a big deal.

Well done! Thanks for posting.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?