I'm glad you found something that gives you a reason and purpose for living.

Musically it sounds good, and you sing well too.

I will simply say, regarding the lyrics, that I absolutely disagree with the topic and position taken in the song.

Keep writing, because, with the background you claimed, you have a talent for it.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.