|
Log in to post
|
Print Thread |
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
Apologies for being missing but it has been an horrific and exceptionally dark period of my life in the past few months and then on Christmas Eve someone stopped me and introduced himself, as an ex-patient from when I was a Dentist. I didn't know what to say because in front of me was a woman.... He then said that he always was a cross dresser but now was transitioning. He talked and I listened for maybe 5 minutes and verse 2 is a little of what he said. Jeez what a brave man to stop me and tell me his thoughts. When he went he shook my hand and said thanks for listening. This is for him. In the song I pretended we were child-hood mates Hullo Suzie When we were kids we used to hang about every day in the park we were the kinda friends that'll watch each others backs then home alone with your thoughts going through your mind, oh so dark I never knew you didn't feel the same as I did. You say you never get used to people who stop and stare it was hard and you cried each night when you were alone you said you felt deserted as no-one seemed to have a care but now you can be who ever it is that you finally want to be. Hullo Susie x3 I'm glad you can feel at home at last RealTracks in song: ~572:Bass, Electric, Blues BB Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 1595:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Pop8thsSteady Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 1814:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking CelticAir Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~368:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065**************** RealTracks in song: 626:Harmonica, Background Travis Ev 085******************* RealTracks in song: 2364:Synth, ElectroFlutes, Rhythm Pop Ev 085******************* RealTracks in song: 1543:Synth Pad, PopBelieve Ev16 065******************* RealDrums in Song: BluesRockSlowEv^1-a:SideStick , b:Snare FM7 using chord track for the filter sweeps Me on Heritage Les Paul and Line 6 UX2 using cranked Marshall. Backing vocals The Flab Four. It'll be interesting to read what you lot think Alyn
Last edited by gibson; 01/14/16 01:42 AM.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 3,311
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 3,311 |
Alyn my old friend, this is simply exceptional.
Even by your high standards of creativity this stands out as something special.
From the first ethereal chord it had me entranced and then held me spellbound as it developed until it exploded into that magnificent ending.
The lyrics and the story just add another dimension to what is already an amazing piece of writing.
Did I say I liked it? Just going back for another listen to make sure.
ROG.
PS. Nice guitar work.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 2,888
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 2,888 |
Hi Alyn,
thanks for the lyrics and the background story.
Great build up and instrumentation.
Especially like the filter sweeps, your guitar and The Flab Four.
A great listen (several times).
Guenter
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,116
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,116 |
You weren't really clear whether your song character was actually a childhood mate or just a stranger searching for a thoughtful ear. No matter, the end result is a sensational song. Clearly one of your best across the board. A great, great subject and very contemporary for today. Sorry the past few months have been hard on you, but welcome back. I guess there's nothing like running into an old mate who is transitioning to a transgender to bump you out of a funk. 
BIAB Ultra Pak+ 2024:RB 2024, Latest builds: Dell Optiplex 7040 Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, Intel Core i7-6700 3.4GHz CPU and 16 GB Ram Memory.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Mar 2013
Posts: 4,477
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Mar 2013
Posts: 4,477 |
Hi, Alyn !
This is an exceptionally good write
and production ! I think this is one
of your best !
Cheers
Norman
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,604
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,604 |
Beautiful song Alyn. Guitar and pipe was superb. Excellent vocal. Guitar solo was an awesome touch..
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2010
Posts: 1,719
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: May 2010
Posts: 1,719 |
Hi Alyn. Beautiful song. Riveting flutes (or is that the harmonica, sounds amazing) and a touch sad. Hope all is well with you. Cheers.
Last edited by RichMac; 01/13/16 01:05 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 6,930
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 6,930 |
Really fascinating song!! The music creates an eerie feeling that goes so well with the complicated subject. Instrumentation and mix are excellent-feels totally live and organic. Love what you did with that harmonica. And, finally, I had no idea you could play like that!! Epic!! This is an extremely creative and well done song in every sense. Wonderful work!! Take care. Greg
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 11,777
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 11,777 |
Stunnnning, Alyn!
Written like it simply fell out of your heart.
The acoustics sound spectacular - not always an easy thing to get right.
Your vocal is heart-wrenching. Beautiful.
The atmospheric background is really nicely done. Haunting - perfect for the song.
The Hullo Suzie x3 - super. As that was ending, I was thinking... "how cool would it be if it broke out into a big rock sound right here". AND IT DID!!! And SO well done.
This is truly a work of art.
floyd
P.S. .... been missin' ya - wondering where you got off to... I do hope all is well...
oh - almost forgot... nice guitar work!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 9,407
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 9,407 |
Wow.... impressive!
I'm listening on cans and this is stunningly good. With out a doubt your BEST ever.
The textures in the music are really well done. The sweep works and the ending was executed well.
Like I said.... very nice.
I can relate to this because my brother is now a woman. He won the "most changed" award at his high school reunion. That took some cajones to attend something like that. He made the change quite a few years back and needless to say, it was quite a shock to many people in the family as well as friends.
O-bla dee... life goes on....
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 532
Journeyman
|
|
Journeyman
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 532 |
Alyn I like the fact that you took a tough subject and made a terrific song out of it. Very good imagination on the instrumentation and use of it. Absolute superb guitar playing (you were smoking)! Enjoyed listening.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
ROG, Thank you, I wrote this on my 10 string guitar (2 broken strings  ) and was gonna be LOUD all the way through but when the words hit everything changed. It is a sad song because he/she was tearful when we said goodbye and he walked away all hunched up. The ending was me "telling" him to walk tall. I haven't seen him since but want him to listen. Glad you enjoyed Alyn
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
Thanks Guenter,
The sweeps came by accident as I was playing around with the chord track and you must know that feeling when you go "that's it"
So glad you enjoyed
Alyn
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
You weren't really clear whether your song character was actually a childhood mate or just a stranger searching for a thoughtful ear. No matter, the end result is a sensational song. Clearly one of your best across the board. A great, great subject and very contemporary for today. Sorry the past few months have been hard on you, but welcome back. I guess there's nothing like running into an old mate who is transitioning to a transgender to bump you out of a funk. Sorted your query out as the guy was an ex-patient I hadn't seen for 17 years, and I didn't know what to do when he stopped me. But I too noticed all the strange looks we got as he talked to a long grey haired weirdo (me  ) I can't imagine what it would be like to feel as he did and it put my problems into perspective a bit. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for listening Alyn
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2014
Posts: 4,048
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: May 2014
Posts: 4,048 |
What a great song Alyn! Dark but beautiful.
Like Floyd said the acoustic guitars sound very clear and bright.
The harmonica and electro-flute are such an asset to this mix!
The backing vocals are beautiful, and then of course, as always that sudden dynamic solo.
Your best!
Rob & Anne-Marie
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 7,835
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 7,835 |
This is an awesome production and great song. Turn up the vocals a little though.
Other than that, one heck of a job. Nice!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 14,187
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 14,187 |
Janice just said that it sounds "sad in an ethereal kind of way...and also hints
of the production of the Beatles during the Strawberry Fields Forever period.
I have a cousin who made the same change and sadly was ostracized by the
immediate family. Very sad, indeed.
Your use of RT's, etc., is always very innovative and this tune illustrates that
very well. The build (explosion?) into the rock sound was brilliant.
Enjoyable and thought provoking!
J&B
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,542
Veteran
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,542 |
Alyn
A superb production. Liked all of it and very clever use of the real tracks.
Floyd says it all really well.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
Hi, Alyn !
This is an exceptionally good write
and production ! I think this is one
of your best !
Cheers
Norman Thank Norman!! ( wow that feels so weird ) glad you enjoyed Alyn
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 3,079 |
Beautiful song Alyn. Guitar and pipe was superb. Excellent vocal. Guitar solo was an awesome touch.. So glad you enjoyed it Scott. The ending needed a change of direction. Thanks for listening Alyn
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.
ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 Italian for Windows is Here!
Ci siamo dati da fare e abbiamo aggiunto oltre 50 nuove funzionalità e una straordinaria raccolta di nuovi contenuti, tra cui 222 RealTracks, nuovi RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, "Songs with Vocals" Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 3, Playable RealDrums Set 2, due nuovi set di "RealDrums Stems", XPro Styles PAK 6, Xtra Styles PAK 17 e altro ancora!
Tutti Pacchetti | Nuove Caratteristiche
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 French for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 apporte plus de 50 fonctions nouvelles ainsi qu'une importante de contenus nouveaux à savoir : 222 RealTracks, des RealStyles nouveaux, des SuperTracks MIDI, des Etudes d'Instruments, des Prestations d'Artistes, des "Morceaux avec Choeurs", un Set 3 de Tracks Jouables, un Set 2 de RealDrums Jouables, deux nouveaux Sets de "RealDrums Stems", des Styles XPro PAK 6, des Xtra Styles PAK 17 et bien plus encore!
Tous Packages | Nouvelles Fonctionnalités
Video: Making a Song with Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V
Take your Band-in-a-Box® project to a whole new level when you incorporate ChatGPT and Synth V to add lyrics and vocals to your song!
We wanted to demonstrate how this is done with our video, where we show you how to go from nothing to a finished "radio ready" modern pop song by combining the features of Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V!
Listen to the finished song, so you get a listen to the finished product: https://demos.pgmusic.com/misc/behindthefame.m4a
If you like it, watch the video. Either way, let's hear your comments!
Henry Clarke: Revolutionize Your Band-in-Box® Tracks with Regenerating Function
User Video: Next-Level AI Music Editing with ACE Studio and Band-in-a-Box®
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 German for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 für Windows Deutsch ist verfügbar!
Wir waren fleißig und haben über 50 neue Funktionen und eine erstaunliche Sammlung neuer Inhalte hinzugefügt, darunter 222 RealTracks, neue RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, "Songs with Vocals" Artist Performance Sets, abspielbare RealTracks Set 3, abspielbare RealDrums Set 2, zwei neue Sets von "RealDrums Stems", XPro Styles PAK 6, Xtra Styles PAK 17 und mehr!
Paket | Was ist Neu
Update Your PowerTracks Pro Audio 2024 Today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Forums66
Topics81,930
Posts739,025
Members38,621
| |
Most Online2,537
Jan 19th, 2020
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean