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Just a little waltz (a bit wordy at 78 words  ) I've misplaced the original file on this, so no memo. All BIAB with some strings and such added. Comments or crits welcomed.  The WAV: https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/the-widows-walkThe MP3: https://soundcloud.com/90-db/the-widows-walkThe Widow's Walk ©2015 Robert Randall Burke Day after day Down by the quay She scans the horizon for canvas A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk. Tell her a tale Of life under sail And she'll tell you one about waiting To hear a ship's bells' Homecoming knells Down on the Widow's Walk. The fog is just lifting As she strains to see Just what her future will be A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk.
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Nicely done, Sir. Strong lyrically, good performance.
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Here are my favorite parts of this, Bob:
Day after day
Down by the quay
She scans the horizon for canvas
A month overdue
Soon becomes two
Down on The Widow's Walk.
Tell her a tale
Of life under sail
And she'll tell you one about waiting
To hear a ship's bells'
Homecoming knells
Down on the Widow's Walk.
The fog is just lifting
As she strains to see
Just what her future will be
A month overdue
Soon becomes two
Down on The Widow's Walk.
Lyric writing simply does not get tighter than this. Such a WOW-factor.
The melody is beautiful, too.
The production is perfect for it.
The bar goes up again.
Killer.
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I really like this. I think it is very artistic all the way around. Great sounds, warm, charming, and super lyrics.
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I really love this song. It's got real hit potential in my humble opinion, but quay is pronounced 'key'. That would drive me nuts. Maybe you can change the first sentence to rhyme with key? Anyway love it. Nice voice. Its style reminds me of traditional English folk songs.  'Too close to the Moon' is also really beautiful as well.
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One hell of a tune, yes to echo Floyd, this is some tight writing.
Congrats!
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Bob,
Just beautiful... Great lyrics and outstanding vocal.
Bob
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Bob, this is a great one. An economical set of lyrics that needs nothing more. It has the ring of an olde English sea shanty wrapped in a waltz. I love the melody. Bravo! Tom
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Lovely folk feel - very pretty.
Nice lyric excellent vocal.
(Listened to both versions the guitar sounds much better to me in the uncompressed version.)
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Hey Bob,
This is beautiful. The accompaniment is a great fit and, as floyd has already mentioned, lyric writing doesn't get any tighter than this. You sure know how to make 78 words work for you! This is definitely up there with the best!
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Nicely done Bob. A lyric that draws you in powerfully; with a perfect musical setting. Very enjoyable.
John
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Paul,
Thanks for the kind remarks.I see your father worked with Marty Robbins. I knew his manager years ago.
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fj,
Thanks for listening and the nice comments. Appreciate it.
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Bob
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David,
Thanks. Appreciate the listen.
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Bob
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I really love this song. It's got real hit potential in my humble opinion, but quay is pronounced 'key'. That would drive me nuts. Maybe you can change the first sentence to rhyme with key? Anyway love it. Nice voice. Its style reminds me of traditional English folk songs. 'Too close to the Moon' is also really beautiful as well. lambada, Thanks for the comments. Actually, "quay" has several different pronounciations, if you study it's Etymology. http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/quay"Too Close To The Moon" is a Lawrence Oliver song. Regards, Bob
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Danny,
Thanks for listening and commenting.
Regards,
Bob
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Bob,
Thanks for the kind words. Hope you are well.
Regards,
Bob
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Tommy, My head is full of shanties. Past life maybe? thanks for the kind comments. Regards, Bob
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Bob
Lovely folk feel - very pretty.
Nice lyric excellent vocal.
(Listened to both versions the guitar sounds much better to me in the uncompressed version.) Peter, Thanks. That's why I post WAV files in addition to the MP3's. I've had the same experience as you. Regards, Bob
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Noel,
Thanks. Appreciate the kind words.
Regards,
Bob
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