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https://soundcloud.com/belladonna-amaya/your-christmas-cardsTitle Your Christmas Cards DJE 12/09/17 Verse 1 Sparkles of silver and gold Colors of red and green In my mailbox this season Telling me where you’ve been The years you spent in Europe Last year saw the Southern Cross Always admired your wanderlust For me this small town’s enough Chorus Your Christmas cards each year Bring silent words that ring clear I stare at them on my mantle And cling to hope like a crutch I don’t hear I love you Not even, let’s have lunch Your Christmas cards say so much Verse 2 The summer of our first love I was young and naïve Said I was your only one Promised you’ld never leave I’vd wallpaper’d these empty rooms With our old love letters Wonder why your cards never ask If my life’s any better Chorus Bridge So Merry Xmas Baby I should be happy you’re gone Dreams are so hard to move from Chorus
Last edited by Belladonna; 12/19/17 07:56 AM.
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Donna,
A very nice write. Nice imagery throughout. A bunch of good lines. Really like...
"I’ve wallpaper’d these empty rooms
With our old love letters"
You did a nice job on the use of BIAB for this.
Well done.
fj
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Very well done, Belladonna  It's wonderfully catchy, and you fully captured the Christmas feel here - both through the lyricism and the songwriting. It's a really good write, and I don't think I'd change a thing here. Great job, and thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Deryk
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Excellent song. Super lyrics. Well done
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Thanks guys for the nice vibes. Getting a little better on the BIAB.
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Well done!
Enjoyed it and particularly the rich imagery in the write. It would make a GREAT video.
Have a fun Christmas!
J&B
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HI!
You'ce very nicely captured the soft and personal side of Christmas. That';s an excellent lyric! Many really terrific lines! Very nice!
Merry Christmas.
Alan
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Thanks Janice & Bud and Al-David. Hope you all have a wonderful
Xmas. It's been so nice meeting all the really great people on
this web-site and I hope you all have a very productive 2018.
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Donna, Some nice lines in this one. Good choices on the Real tracks. I enjoyed my listen, Tom
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Nice song, good melody & lyrics
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Dear Ms. Belladonna...
When I was growing up I couldn't understand what people found so attractive about poetry. Most of it seemed too fanciful, too abstract, to hold my attention. I thought it was boring.
But all that changed when I started composing songs. Slowly but surely, it became apparent to me that music could be a kind of translating tool that helped to unveil ideas, meanings and emotions hidden below the surface of lyrics.
Now, I seek out poetry for musical inspiration, and I'm finding a great deal of it listening to your quietly powerful songs. As delivered through calmly expressive singing voice, your songs have a quality of stillness and meditation. You seem to find spaces in our collective, chaotic existence that are far, far away from the proverbial "roaring crowd" of cities. You create worlds in your songs that are the emotional equivalents of standing by a stream running through the woods, experiencing the solitude of a cave in the hills, or watching the wind clearing clouds from a night sky through which we see the vastness of the Universe.
"Your Christmas Cards" is yet another of your finely felt and observant stories about the infinite layers in our lives, how they blend, clash, mirror, obscure and reveal things about ourselves and others that keep us searching for answers in the past, always surprised by the present, and curious and hopeful about the future.
Thank you, Ms. Belladonna.
LOREN
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Thanks Tommyad. Looked at your web-site, nice a lot of really good songs and I can tell you've worked hard and for a long time.
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Bluage, your words always touch my heart. Beautiful poetry in even your comments. Thanks for your kind words. Donna
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Pretty song!! Really creative idea to write about. Some really powerful lines. Music flows very nicely. Enjoyed! Take care. Greg
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I really love this song! Your lyrics give it such a magical feel to it. Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
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Thanks for your kind words. Merry Xmas!! Greg and Ember.
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Really cool song Belladonna!
Merry Christmas!!
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Donna, nice writing, as J&B mentioned the imagery in the lyric, you did very well with this. It may sound odd to you, but this reminds very much of the style of Gordon Lightfoot! I could really hear him doing this! Thanks, Torrey
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Thanks Torrey. I love Gordon Lightfoot and have listened to his songs a lot, so I guess maybe that came through a little.
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