Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Robert,

You've excelled. This is just so creative, poetry put to song.

Absolutely perfect in every way, musically it takes you on a beautiful a journey.

Thoroughly enjoyable, and sensitively beautiful. The girl with the Siam eyes is very lucky, indeed.


Thank you, VideoTrack!

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Hi, Robert.

I found the lyrics to be wonderful, but a bit hard to hear over the guitar.

The arrangement had a unique sound - sparse, and driven by the high arpeggiating guitar - which was very cool.


David,
Thanks for your listen and comments.
Just had another listen, (after all the production work I find it helpful to leave songs be for a week or so) this time on new monitors. Unusually for me, I actually think I got the vocals/instrument volume balance right on this one, but do hear places where the intonation is a bit slurred.
Yes that`s a nice high strung guitar track.

Robert