Riccled,
All the elements are cool but the vocal is too far froward, so much so that the music sounds like it's in another room.
That can be sorted easily by pulling back on the volume of your voice and applying some of the same reverb the instruments have to it.
I reckon, with that done, this will sit nicely together and the song will reach more of its potential.


Cheers
rayc
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