Originally Posted By: dcuny
I've been reminding myself to use more alliteration in my own lyrics, and then I hear it done excellently here.

Your verses are always great, but the way the chorus wraps everything up in bow and tugs at the heart knocks me out. As PeterF says, a "songwriting class".

And a great arrangement to boot! Nice solo and rhythm guitar parts.

As usual, good music done right. smile


Thanks, David. I've been considering doing a post in the Songwriting forum about using alliteration. It is a valuable tool that only a handful of songwriters have in their arsenal...