Originally Posted By: dcuny
Quote:
Deciduous love
Leaves when summer is done

I see what you did there. wink

To be honest, the title sort of put me off - a bit too clever for my taste. And although I'm still a bit on the fence about that, everything else - singing, production, arrangement, lyric - is stellar.

Excellent.

Hi David,

Clever pickup! I settled on 'leaves' for two reasons....

1) because through word play it seemed to relate better with 'deciduous'

2) it also formed the pattern 'lives', 'love', 'leaves' where the same consonant sounds (ignoring the 's') are heard with a changing vowel sound (like slip, slop, slap)

Thanks for taking the times to have a listen and comment. Appreciate the feedback.

All the best,
Noel

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