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New I Lay beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) #578468 01/29/20 01:09 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 OP Veteran
OP Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	Hello All. This is another style from 2020 Band in a Box. All comments welcome. Rob4580 I Lay Beneath Snow The barman is closing he said you must get going he wore a wry smile in his face. One more for the road to ease my heavy load and I'll be out of this place. I think of my sweetheart who broke this old heart and I've missed her love all these years. So I keep on going her memories keep following so hard to fight back the tears. Now I will sleep sound in bed on the ground and lay beneath fresh mountain snow. I dream of her charms when she lay my arms held tight and not let me go. Bridge Now dream on sweat dreams and mend tattered seems and bring back the good times I've known. How we danced in the dark when you stole my heart now I sleep beneath fresh mountain snow. You'll find me in spring as I lay beneath sweet pine don't take me to some other place. You'll know I slept sound in my bed on the ground and I died with a smile on my face. The barman is closing he said you must get going he wore a wry smile in his face. One more for the road to ease my heavy load and I'll be out of this place. **** Song Summary ********* Title:Lay Beneath Snow File:I Lay Beneath Snow.SGU Key=G , Tempo 40, Length (m:s)=3:18 1 bar intro, 28 bar chorus, from bar 2 to bar 29. Repeat x1 chorus No Melody No Soloist track. Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0, Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes, Style is _BURGEON.STY (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) RealTracks in style: 2873:Bass, Acoustic, AmericanaSlow128Byron Sw 040 RealTracks in style: 3178:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm CampfireSlow128 Sw 040 RealTracks in style: 3169:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Rhythm Slow12-8ArpTremoloBrent Sw 040 RealTracks in song: 3167:Guitar, Baritone Electric, BackgroundSoloist LowSlow12-8TremoloBrent Sw 040 RealDrums [in style:AmericanaSlow128^08-a:Hihat, b:Brushes Composed with Band in a Box and mixed with Studio One. Vocal myself. ***************** Last edited by Rob4580; 01/30/20 11:33 AM. https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578486 01/29/20 03:42 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2017 Posts: 2,954 BC Ember - PG Music PG Music Staff
Ember - PG Music PG Music Staff Joined: Jun 2017 Posts: 2,954 BC	I really love lyrics that tell a clear story, and I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing! Cheers, Ember

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578495 01/29/20 04:24 PM User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 5,640 Sydney Australia PeterF Veteran
PeterF Veteran Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 5,640 Sydney Australia	Rob Nice easy listening track, enjoyed the vocal, and the mix. Good work. Peter

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578524 01/29/20 09:50 PM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2018 Posts: 1,381 Tangmo Expert
Tangmo Expert Joined: Aug 2018 Posts: 1,381	Love that slow 3/4. All the internal rhyme is great to hear and the story is straight-up country. I really enjoyed the western sliding-around of the melody. Don't take this wrong, but it so well fits the boozy story. Well put-together song and enjoyable listening. BIAB 2021 Audiophile. Windows 10 64bit. Songwriter, lyricist, composer(?) loving all styles. Some pre-BIAB music from Farfetched Tangmo Band's first CD. https://alonetone.com/tangmo/playlists/close-to-the-ground

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578582 01/30/20 04:02 AM User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2017 Posts: 3,414 Deryk - PG Music PG Music Staff
Deryk - PG Music PG Music Staff Joined: Feb 2017 Posts: 3,414	Wow - I thought the groove was fantastic, and the story-telling on this is captivating and heart-felt. Very vivid, and despite being somewhat bleak, it felt necessary. I'm a big fan of this one - thanks so much for sharing! Cheers, Deryk

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Ember - PG Music #578637 01/30/20 10:16 AM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 8,659 South Carolina C Charlie Fogle Veteran
Charlie Fogle Veteran C Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 8,659 South Carolina	I always enjoy your vocals. Very smooth. Enjoyed my listen. BIAB 2025:RB 2025, Latest builds: Dell Optiplex 7040 Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, Intel Core i7-6700 3.4GHz CPU and 16 GB Ram Memory.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578638 01/30/20 10:19 AM User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,987 Texas City, Texas Steve Young Expert
Steve Young Expert Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,987 Texas City, Texas	Great job! A little Johnny Cash vibe in this one. Can't go wrong with that. Steve Steve Young Music "In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Ember - PG Music #578754 01/30/20 11:28 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 OP Veteran
OP Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	Thank you Ember. Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music I really love lyrics that tell a clear story, and I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing! https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578762 01/31/20 12:08 AM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2016 Posts: 6,890 Cooran Queensland Australia rayc Veteran
rayc Veteran Joined: Apr 2016 Posts: 6,890 Cooran Queensland Australia	The baritone tracks in BIAB are excellent - they don't seem to fit my tempos but they're cool and you've used them well. Nice dynamic mix Rob. You do the back woods melancholy oh, so well. Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578789 01/31/20 06:04 AM User Showcase
Joined: May 2018 Posts: 2,434 United Kingdom musician17 Veteran
musician17 Veteran Joined: May 2018 Posts: 2,434 United Kingdom	This is a small masterpiece and no mistake. The lyrics are superb and the music is the perfect foil. I love the structure of the verse lines - and, though it gets bleaker as the song goes on, it is subtly and beautifully done ... the realisation that the person in the song actually dies creeps up on one before one knows it and strikes powerfully at one's awareness. In short: a genuinely excellent job - I loved it. My website

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578797 01/31/20 07:58 AM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 12,388 Florida floyd jane Veteran
floyd jane Veteran Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 12,388 Florida	Rod, A classic Country Folk sounding song. Good vocal, as always. I did not much care for the snare sound. I though it was too loud (and a little odd) for this song. fj 150+ Songs produced using BIAB RealTracks And 50 more... and some more...

Re: New I Lay beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578834 01/31/20 11:18 AM User Showcase
Joined: May 2010 Posts: 1,719 New Zealand RichMac Expert
RichMac Expert Joined: May 2010 Posts: 1,719 New Zealand	Hi Rob Really enjoyed this one. Particularly the cadence of the lyrics and the sad tale. A bit Johnny Cash and a bit Leonard Cohen. Cheers. https://soundcloud.com/tuigorge

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) PeterF #578921 02/01/20 12:57 AM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 OP Veteran
OP Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	Thank you Pete. Originally Posted By: PeterF Rob Nice easy listening track, enjoyed the vocal, and the mix. Good work. Peter https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #578953 02/01/20 06:32 AM User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2011 Posts: 15,293 GA USA Janice & Bud Veteran
Janice & Bud Veteran Joined: Dec 2011 Posts: 15,293 GA USA	Definitely got a Cash thing going here. Lyrically and vocally it reminds us of some of his best...and we are fans. The baritone guitars nailed it...good job. We like it!!! J&B Our albums and singles are on Spotify, Apple Music, Amazon Music, YouTube Music, Pandora and more. If interested search on Janice Merritt. Thanks! Our Videos are here on our website.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Tangmo #579029 02/01/20 01:40 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 OP Veteran
OP Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	many thanks for your kind words Tangmo Originally Posted By: Tangmo Love that slow 3/4. All the internal rhyme is great to hear and the story is straight-up country. I really enjoyed the western sliding-around of the melody. Don't take this wrong, but it so well fits the boozy story. Well put-together song and enjoyable listening. https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #579076 02/01/20 09:14 PM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2018 Posts: 2,012 Mill Valley, California USA D Deej56 Veteran
Deej56 Veteran D Joined: Apr 2018 Posts: 2,012 Mill Valley, California USA	Rob, Johnny Cash cool—love your vocal on this—sweet melody that keeps the ears listening. The drums do need to come down just a little bit—a bit harsh in spots. But that’s a minor nit, easily corrected if you agree. Killer throwback tune! Enjoyed it. All my best, Deej

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #579163 02/02/20 10:32 AM User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2000 Posts: 1,944 Texas Jim Expert
Jim Expert Joined: Jun 2000 Posts: 1,944 Texas	A good country song, sound, smooth vocal, & delivery... You have thematic shades similar to Lefty's "Long Back Veil" (Compliment)... And I always enjoy hearing your new songs! Jim †=☮&♥

Re: New I sleep beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Deryk - PG Music #579320 02/03/20 01:30 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 OP Veteran
OP Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	Thank you very much Derek. Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Wow - I thought the groove was fantastic, and the story-telling on this is captivating and heart-felt. Very vivid, and despite being somewhat bleak, it felt necessary. I'm a big fan of this one - thanks so much for sharing! https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: New I Lay beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #579321 02/03/20 01:43 PM User Showcase
Joined: Sep 2018 Posts: 3,292 Virginia USA Ezekiel's Storm Veteran
Ezekiel's Storm Veteran Joined: Sep 2018 Posts: 3,292 Virginia USA	Nice work with the musicality of the lyrics--as mentioned earlier, skillful use of internal rhyme. The BIAB style fits your song nicely.

Re: New I Lay beneath snow - (Burgeon Bari Arp Americana Folk) Rob4580 #579446 02/04/20 01:38 PM User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2016 Posts: 3,357 Robertkc Veteran
Robertkc Veteran Joined: Jun 2016 Posts: 3,357	Rob, These Americana styles are a great fit for your voice and you matched the feel of the music with that sad story! Very old west and enjoyable. Robert

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