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THIS GLASS (SoundCloud) _REMEX2.STY. Remex Modern Ctry 16ths Soloist All RealTracks. Quintet. *** with Soloist ***Tempo=75 (65-90) Instruments: El.Bass, El.Guitar(solo), El.Guitar, El.Guitar, Drums RD: ModCountry16ths^02-a:Closed hat, Sync-kick, b:Ride, Sync-kick :Shannon Forrest RT4020: Bass, Electric, ModernCountry16ths Ev16 075 , Michael Rhodes RT4026: Guitar, Electric, Soloist ModCountryGrittyBrent Ev16 075 , Brent MasonRT4021: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModCountryBalladPower1 Ev16 075 , Brent Mason RT4023: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModCountryBalladPower8thsMute Ev16 075 , Brent Mason Added: RT2690: Guitar, Electric, Soloist Slow16thsPopBrentSimple Ev16 075 , Brent Mason Mixed in Reaper
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Howdy Dewey....
This is a good write....mix works for me.
Lead vox has a good melody & BGV's are tight and clear.
Well performed all around.
Back to it....
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A solid, enjoyable listen. The vocals are excellent.
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Excellent write, well sung and produced. It seems redundant to talk about lyrics to the person who wrote this, but indulge me... I love how you used title object is as a device to tell a story, in a way that feels authentic and emotionally honest. You pulled me into the song, both with the sad backstory and the narrator's take away. Top-shelf writing! Really, not much else to say, other than really well done. 
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Dewey, this is one great song.
I really liked your vocal on this one.
Great lyrics.
Super drums!
Great mix.
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Standout chorus!
Expertly crafted lyrics.
Production sounds good to me. Love the band.
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Fabulous melody and double plus so in the chorus.
Cheers
rayc
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Excellent write, Dewey. I really like how you build it. Excellent vocals as always. I really enjoy the lyrics and how you brought the whole story out through that glass. The melody is so good, even just the two notes of "this glass."
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Thank you for all the kind words and encouragement everyone!
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A solid job all around.
Especially lyrically:
THIS GLASS
Was a cure and a curse
Delivered needed "medicine" that made life worse
Quote marks are mine.
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Dewey,
Excellent write. A+ vocals and lyrics. Good mix. Easy listen.
Thank you for sharing.
Misha.
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Great storytelling, and the chorus is really good and catchy.
Enjoyed the listen to. A lot!
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Solid write, great vocal, nice production. I liked it, Tom
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Hello Dewey
long time no more heard from you
All the nicer that you have written such a great song again
Great played and sung
Sounds really good
Great work
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
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Great writing Dewey, love your vocals and your all around country sound. Nice production.
Brad
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Dewey...man that's a good song! great write and the production is superb...love the vocals (the harmony is top-notch)...a song about pain so poetically presented...I really enjoyed your performance and your production on this one...one of your best IMHO!
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Dewey,
A nice production and good vocals.
(the drums seemed too busy for the bridge - something more subtle might have been more effective there?)
Well mixed.
fj
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Dewey,
A nice production and good vocals.
(the drums seemed too busy for the bridge - something more subtle might have been more effective there?)
Well mixed.
fj I think you're right, Floyd! As you know, that's an easy fix. Thanks for the input! I've got some potential major lyric changes too that I'm thinking about as well. Na zdrowie!
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I like the song and production is solid. I agree with Floyd on the drums.
Maybe I'm missing something but I don't get it. What is the glass and what's so important about it? I kept trying to figure out what you were singing about. Was it a drinking glass or something else?
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I like the song and production is solid. I agree with Floyd on the drums.
Maybe I'm missing something but I don't get it. What is the glass and what's so important about it? I kept trying to figure out what you were singing about. Was it a drinking glass or something else? Guitarhacker, Thank you for asking because I was second-guessing my lyrics on this one. As I noted in my response to Floyd, I was considering major lyric changes in order to clarify what "This Glass" was. I plan to re-write a few lines in this one and re-demo it so, if you are willing, I'd love to know if the pending changes clear up your confusion. Na zdrowie! Dewey
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