Originally Posted by vicarn
Interesting and well thought out lyric, Marty.
I hope you don't mind a suggestion that you consider changing the line:
Memories of the good times we all share
come alive when we hear some songs,
to something like:
Memories of the good times we all share
mixed up with those thoughts of times we found so hard to bear.

I just thought there may be too many "some songs" going on.

Vic
Mind? OMG, I thrive because of comments and suggestions by all of you on this forum --both to me and to others. I actually thought that there are too many "some songs" in this one, but then I went with the advertising ploy of just repeating the brand over and over so folks will remember it. hehe I like your suggestion for two reasons: it ryhmes and it brings out the fact that songs often bring back the bad memories too. Thanks so much, Vic. Please keep your suggestions coming.

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Marty, cool song! Love your vocals and bass, and the band fits right in. The choice to feature the fiddle really underscored the longing nostalgia in the lyrics. Masterful job, again!
Thanks, Ron. Glad we think alike about the fiddle. For some vague reason I thought the same thing about its nostalgic value.

Originally Posted by MarioD
Marty, some songs are great, like this one!
Super vocal and bass, as usual.
Nice violin lead.
Great mix.
Thanks, Mario! Hope you and Bob are getting together tomorrow for a Three Dash Three-One Mario Mania.


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marty

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