Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Beautiful, especially the vocal harmonies sound really good.
The sparse arrangement is perfect for this kind of song, very good choice.
A little nit: listen to the word "why" at 2:26: no singer would hold this syllable THIS way for so long.
Even for a real singer, this would sound artificial
You have several places like this.
Use several notes (melismatic singing) for these words, perhaps with some more vibrato at the end.
The rest is really good and well arranged [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]
B.D...thanks for your comments...I truly appreciate your instruction and your "nit"...I have a lot to learn...Dan


Originally Posted by Brad Williams
Dan, I don't know a thing about using AI voices - but man you seem to be making great headway with them... and you've had the production and writing down for a long time!
Brad
Hey Brad...I don't know much about AI voices...but I'm learning (SLOWLY!)...thanks fopr your thoughts...Dan


Originally Posted by MarioD
Yes Dan this is different for you but your excellence shines through.
Super synth vocals.
You know how to write three part harmony perfectly.
Super backing tracks.
Great mix.
Mario...thanks for the encouragement...I appreciate it...Dan

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