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Greetings to all. This is rough. Trying to remember how to use the tools but I hope you enjoy it. Included the chart. Hope you give it a play. Please feel free to make pc and non pc comments. https://soundcloud.com/tuigorge/one-too-many-timesStyle is modified _UKBIGRK.STY (Rock w/ Crisp & Fuzz Guitars) RealTracks in style: ~683:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 1000:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockLAFuzzyHeld Ev 120 RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^8-a:Snare, HiHat Open , b:Snare, Ride RT 2625 : Baritone guitar RT 2488 : Bowed bass RT 2488 : Bowed bass plus fuzz One Too Many Times - Richard | E | D | C | B | E One to many | times I see | D disappointment's | bloom | E Bleed the living | colour from the | D room | | E Flowers that we | gathered | D dying in a | vase You | C turn your head away | as you move | B past | it’s A | A sorry state of the | E union a | A god damn crying | E shame
A | A shabby circum-| E stance I'm not | F# sure who to | B blame
Will the | A sun come up to-| E morrow | A love is on the | E line
Per-| A haps we pushed our | E luck babe | F# one too many | B times
Per-| A haps we pushed our | E luck too many | B times || E One too many | times I see you | D leave with no good-| bye | E Stalking down the | road, head held | D high | | E To the | city to the | D light, to the | life You | C know the leavin | cuts us like a | B knife | it’s A | A sorry state of the | E union a | A god damn crying | E shame
A | A shabby circum-| E stance I'm not | F# sure who to | B blame
Will the | A sun come up to-| E morrow | A love is on the | E line
Per-| A haps we pushed our | E luck babe | F# one too many | B timesPer-| A haps we pushed our | E luck too many | B times |
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Hi Rich,
Okay, it's a little rough. But you have the foundation of a pretty danged good song here. Nice chord arrangement and good backing tracks. There's a lot of good stuff to work with here. With a little attention and work, this could be a a real scorcher! Great start for a terrific song in the making. Best to you, mate.
Alan
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Good to hear from you has been awhile. Cool tune . Guitar was excellent. Excellent backtrack and lyric.
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Great work here, Rich It may sound a little rough, but you can definitely hear the potential here for a fantastic song! It has a great arrangement, and a really good groove on it. Can't wait to hear what this evolves to - thanks for sharing!
Cheers, Deryk
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Good to see you back around.
Enjoyed it and the lyric could be metaphorical -- applicable for a lot of things happening in the world nowadays.
Cool!
J&B
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Despite its roughness (which it is only slightly rough), you have all the workings of a fantastic song! With a bit more tweaking, this song will knock people's socks off. All the ground work is already done.
Glad to see you getting back in to the program! <3 And can't wait for the next one.
Cheers, Ember
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Thanks Al for your generous comments. I'm a starter but not much of a finisher. May look at it again one day. Best wishes to you and Di.
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Thanks for you comments Scott. Some feedback is very useful as i never have the faintest idea how others will view my songs. Cheers.
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Thanks Deryk. Good to hear from you. Encouraging comments. I'm almost tempted to do some more work on it. Hmmmm. Cheers.
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Thanks Bud. Hope you and Jan are well. Like the comment about the metaphorical. Maybe the "sorry state of the union" deserves it's own song. Cheers.
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Thank you Ember. What fantastic comments! Yes back to playing with the toys in RealBand. Enough fab posabilities to drive me nuts. Cheers.
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Cool tune Rich!! I think everything works-good melody and very strong lyric. I like the heavier rock vibe for this tune. Nicely done! Good to see you back!! Take care. Greg
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i always enjoy your writing
and this is another clever catchy one
good melody too, I like the roughness
you know, where I come from vase and past don't rhyme
(sounds just fine when you sing it)
enjoyed the listen,
Kenny
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Good to have you back Rich! Nice this one. The transition to the chorus gets this song some extra power.
Rob
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A good rock sound Richard. Good to see you back doing some music...
I'd turn those drums up (a bunch).
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Hi Floyd. Hope you've been well. Thanks for the super useful feedback. (done turned em up) I hardly ever play with drums and tend to forget all about them. Cheers.
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Hi Greg. Thanks for the very positive comments. Would like to explore some heavy metal sometime. Not forgetting the drums next time. Best wishes.
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Hi Kenny.
Your vase and past comment made my day. Varze or Vayse. Glad you enjoyed the song. Interesting how different accents give different rhymes.
Of course I don't have an accent. Everyone else does. I talks proper. Hahaha. Cheers.
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Thank you Rob. I hope to get more time for music now. And do some more listening. There are so many skilful people here I think maybe I should take up golf instead. Cheers.
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Your vocal delivery is pretty Rod McKuen but the song sounds good. The arrangement is fine in a country rock. Interesting hybrid style. You should scout around the board for a collaborator to sing for you. Hey, send Jacinda an email!
Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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