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Hi All, This song was written while watching a video that Joliz shot from inside a car going through a car wash. There was just something very inspiring and contemplative about this 2 minute trip. This is called 2 Minutes In A Car Wash. And we thought we would also include the Video. I rolled into a car wash In a flood of soap and rain A self-contained storm Where the outcome is the same Steam on the windshield A ghost in the glass Held an unlit cigarette Saw the present and the past The radio was static Some broken English song The DJ said “this is Berlin” But I knew he got it wrong You left me in Kreuzberg With your paintings and your gin You said “love's a revolution” But you never let me in I stayed too long at Kottbusser Tor Thinking you'd come down In your fashion army coat Like a queen without a crown Neon bleeds on cobblestones Your name in every drip I saw your shadow on a bar stool And a guy with a crooked lip Now the soap’s all in the gutters And the world comes back in grey This city’s got a talent For fading things away The glass is clean on this old wreck It’s time to retreat And somewhere past the Fernsehturm The silence fills your seat BIAB Tracks: 0700: Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotes 085 3912: Guitar, Nylon, Rhythm Songwriter 085 2811: Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm 085 RealDrums: Mallets and Cajon Other Notes: Pre-Production: Track Editing GarageBand & Logic Pro Izotope Ozone 10 Elements & Ozone 11 Izotope Nectar 3 Elements for Vocals Izotope Plasma for Instrument Tracks Processing Bob Mic: Logitech Blue Yeti Bob Vocals: Logic Pro Joliz Mic: Audio Technica AT2020USB+ Joliz Vocals: GarageBand Waves: Vocal Rider Final Track Mix & Master: Logic Pro As always - thanks for listening! Bob
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Super sweet vignette, Bob! Like how simply your vocals are placed on this one. Can hear two guitars in stereo but only one credit, was that the same RT both times? Love the warmth of the two acoustics like that. Very nice!
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Bob, this was fantastic
Super spoken word song - great job on that
Great video
Super mix
Loved it.
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Hi Bob and Joliz! I think you really caught and represented this moment - like others where we are held in a position and given rare time to contemplate some of the deeper things in life. These times can almost be like a detox. Musically, the parts that supported this two minute reprieve so well were …
- the repetitive chord progression
- Joliz’s ahhh backing
- your nearly-spoken vocals
To me, the song felt like a calming balm. Well done!
Andrew D
PS I really appreciated the spelling of ‘grey’.
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Reminded me a bit of one of Bob Dylan's "Dream" songs, but of course, it is uniquely you. Loved the lyrics. Great job.
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Ron, Thanks so much. We appreciate that. Yes, two guitars, but same RT, with slightly different processing on two separate tracks. You have a good ear.  Bob
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That was great. What a mood...I was transported to my own car-wash experiences as a kid. Loved that. You are an incredible wordsmith and songwriter. Loved the soft Ahs. I bow to you.
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The trick is to grab inspiration out of the ordinary events and make it seem extraordinary. You did that here. How many others would have written about the simple act of getting a car washed?
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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Hi, Bob.
Love your phrasing. You know how to make a sparse arrangement seem like a symphony.
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Another beautiful song, Robert. The last time I washed my car, I didn't see any of this. I need to change my glasses. I'll get something more poetic!
Laurent
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This is, quite simply, extraordinary. Your lyrics are incredible. Your performance is unbelievable, your inflections on every word is beyond accurate critical description. The video is beautiful and meditative. I was going to quote from the lyrics, but every word is right on the money, so to speak - so impossible for me to highlight just one lyrics section.
One of your best yet, if not indeed your best so far, Bob and Joliz. I hesitate to say "your best", simply because your standard is always up there. But, at the same time, I'm struggling to think of another song of yours that hit me quite like this one. In any case ... hats off. Superb spoken word from Bob, beautiful, otherworldly contribution from Joliz. I can only listen in awe.
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Mario,
Thank you from both of us - that's very kind.
Bob
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Bob, enjoyed this music-picture..all the elements were very effective in getting the listener result that I think you were wanting.
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Hey, I just realized this, Bob. Whenever I see you have a new one posted here, I smile in anticipation. IMO Souncloud has better sound, but I'm diggin' your videos too. Your story telling reminds me of early Joni, and I love it. Your lryics are so poetic and engaging. Joliz adds so much goodness. Somehow you always cleverly manage to create the best melodies for each one.
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Hey, that's a German car wash - is Joliz from Berlin? It's amazing what you came up with just by watching this short video. Love it ![[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]](https://www.pgmusic.com/forums/images/icons/default/thumbs_up.gif) And finally found out that you have a YouTube page. I subscribed of course
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Andrew,
That is very appreciated. Thanks so much from Joliz and I.
Bob
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Rob,
That is very appreciated - thanks from both of us.
Bob
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Bob, you are one of the best lyricist to ever put pen to paper.
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Beth,
That is so kind of you... Thank you from both Joliz and I.
Bob
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Herb,
Joliz & I appreciate that. Thanks so much.
Bob
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