Mitch,

I love it! As to nits, to my ears the doubling of your steel with Tommy's lead at about 2:38 just don't really work for me. Not that they need to be in perfect sync, but it seems to me they are competing for space there. Maybe if you made your steel part a counter part? I don't know. It may work for everyone else. I do like the idea of both instruments being present there, though.

I would bring up the orchestration a little more at 4:05, to make just a slightly more dramatic climax before the fade.

Then the fade seems to drop just a little too abruptly to me.

Again, this is just beautiful! You and Tommy are both very gifted, and it shows. I had Tommy do a lead for me a few songs back, and he did a great job!


Steve Young
Music
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