Paul,

Great job on this. As expected, your vocals shine. Great piano from EZ Keys. Only thing I would think about, because of the intimacy of at least the first half of the song, you might try mixing your vocals with less noticeable effects (primarily less delay). Totally subjective opinion on my part, and your vocals sound just fine as they are. But especially on the piano/acoustic version, you might try just to see how it works. I think it would make the song just a little more intimate, and still has a powerful build to it, to express you have "risen from the ashes". Again, just my opinion. You have a great talent, my friend.

Great song! Thanks for sharing it!

Steve

Steve Young
Music
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