Hi Tano,

This is a very good song and some good advice as already been given.

I will add that the length of the song did not bother me. In fact you have one of two paths you can take. If you are planing for the song to get airplay then yes it is too long but if you want to tell the complete story then it is fine as is.

What I was hearing as I listened was full orchestration, strings and brass, in sections of the song. Sections of the orchestra could be playing counter point lines in areas of the song also. This would keep the interest high through out the 5 minutes, IMHO. Again this is just my opinion.

However I do believe that this is a high quality song that just needs a little polish,

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