You want to know how to improve this particular recording? Don't touch it! (Okay, maybe it is a tad bit too long, but that is how the song goes.)

I love the bright music and equally bright vocals that are expressing such sad and dark thoughts. The contrast between music/vocals and lyrics is nothing short of artistic brilliance. If you could do a rougher vocal, you have a Tom Waits or Bob Dylan hit.

This is outstanding work. (Great use of BIAB too.)

My music can be heard at: The Cracks