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Another little ditty. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=1176543&songID=12210084Carolina Girl ©2012 Robert Randall Burke She is cool water on a hot summer day Warm breezes where the palm trees sway Big brown eyes that take my breath away She's my Carolina Girl. She's a sun risin' in a mountain sky Sandy beaches where the sea birds fly Her sweet voice could make the angels cry She's my Carolina Girl. Carolina, Carolina A little bit of heaven in this world You have blessed me with A Carolina Girl. She is Sunday morning when the church bells ring The sweetest song that I'll ever sing And I'll be givin' this wedding ring To my Carolina Girl. Carolina, Carolina A little bit of heaven in this world You have blessed me with A Carolina..... The greatest gift A Carolina..... Blessed me with A Carolina Girl.
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Bob,
ANOTHER great song! Beautiful lyric ("Her sweet voice could make the angels cry"). Beautiful melody. Beautiful production and mix.
But.... this one just CRIES for some sweet harmonies in that beautiful chorus!!
Loved it.
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Hey Bob.
Every time you post a new song you raise that bar a bit higher.
Sounds to me like a song that James Taylor could have written. Like Floyd said, beautiful lyrics and melody with a mix that's straight off country radio.
But the best thing has to be your performance of it - so confident, yet relaxed and full of expression.
I go with Floyd again on the harmonies, but it's still a fantastic song.
ROG.
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OMG! Bob you have absolutely stolen my heart with this song. I am totally smitten with it. I want to hear it over and over.
It's so romantic....what a woman loves to hear. Fabulous lyrics. The tune is so pretty. It's just beautifully done and sung. Yeah I could hear some sweet harmonies in there but as is it packs a whallop....
Did I mention I love it...LOL!
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Great stuff Bob. Nice flow, tells your story..... But shouldn't it be about a Florida girl? 
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But.... this one just CRIES for some sweet harmonies in that beautiful chorus!!
You need to lend him Cat and Pickles!!
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Nailed it Bob! That is a great song. Wow what a performance. As we say here in California "Dude!"
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Thanks for the kind remarks guys.
Bob
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As they say in the Southern Province of Oklahoma: "Awesome, Possum!" Very enjoyable throughout.
More please?
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Hi, Bob !
A very nice tune with
a totally incredible sound !:)
Wonderful playing and vocals too !
I enjoyed listening very much !
Cheers
Dani
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Very well done, lyrics are outstanding and the performance is excellent. Music production is top notch, love the lead guitar. Thanks for sharing! My Tunes
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Dr. - Thanks for the kind remark. It wouldn't be possible without your creation. BIAB is the greatest songwriting tool ever.
Don, Dani, Robert – Thanks a lot.
Regards,
Bob
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Hi Bob,
This is so much more than "another little ditty". I thoroughly enjoyed listening. I've got to hand it to you, everything about this is great - music, lyrics, arrangement, mix, performance. I've also got to say that, to my ears, the lyric development is incredibly strong and with each section, I could feel the emotional intensity of the song climb up a notch or two.
This is text book worthy "excellent work"!
Regards,
Noel
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Very nice. I agree, very James Taylor like. One of the songs I like playing just with my guitar is James Taylor’s Carolina on my mind . This reminds me of that song.
Well done!
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Noel and Jo,
Thanks for the kind remarks.
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Bob
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Hi Bob,
Beautiful lyrics, melody, production and mix.
And a beautiful voice.
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Thanks Guenter.
Regards,
Bob
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I knew a girl like that! Couldn't a pass her by so just had to marry her! 46 years - and counting! ( I was a Child Bride!! lol !)
Great song, Bob. Thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing.
Harmonies in the chorus? Why yes, they'd be a cool addition but there are lines in the verses that would be superb with Floyd styles harmonies at the end of some lines too.
Excellent production.
Enjoyed it so much.
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