Hi RichMac,

Great to see you getting in there and applying the Pat Pattison principles!

I love the simile "blissful peace creeps like a thief". It's incredibly visual for me and flows from the tongue in a really comfortable, singable way.

I'm not sure if this is how you intended the concept of "the band" but, for me, it was a metaphor for "Life" as it continues, never-ending and relentlessly travels the years. Loved the concept smile

Very creative!

All the best,
Noel

Last edited by Noel96; 05/10/13 01:08 AM.

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