There is a great song, I believe called MY LAST CRY. You should check it out if you haven't heard it. That is the one I thought you were referencing. I think you did a great job with this. I'm not sure if you intended it but I thought the husband and wife had split up from the lyrics in the chorus. To me anyway, it was a great twist when you realize she'd passed away. Really nice and well-crafted song!! Sounded great too! Take care. Greg