Scott,

A very nice mix! ... a couple of little things... the bass needs just a tad more "meat" - not much - my guess would be about 1.5 dB. It's "okay" the way it is, but it would be nice to add just a bit more bottom end to this.
The transition into the soft section needs something - maybe a hold by the bass and an acoustic strum - and a cymbal that rings for a little longer (everything cuts off too quick).
Those are small things - the rest of the mix is excellent...

floyd