I guess I am a bit late to the party when it comes to the 17th deadline! Nice vocals and the whole songs hangs together quite well. Very well done. I think the lyrical tale matches the given "longterm bender" criteria.
I finally caught a streetjelly last evening, I've been out of touch there a bit. Of course now that I haven't performed in a while over there, I am back to square zero when it comes to knowing any of my songs well enough to do them live again! Oh well, time to get cracking.
Good tune!