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Sorry for starting a new thread, the other was getting too confusing. Here is what I hope is the final mix of Between the Lines. It has BB drums, bass, and 12 string guitar. Overdubs include more 12 string guitar, Stratocaster, tamborine and vocals. Please be critical of the mix, let me know if I need to do it again. https://soundcloud.com/willrockwell/between-the-lines ****** Song Summary ************* Title: Between the Lines File:Between the Lines.SGU Key=D , Tempo 126, Length (m:s)=4:28 No intro. 138 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 138. Repeat x1 chorus No Melody No Soloist track. Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0, Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes, Style is _POPBRIT.STY (PopBrit 2 Guitars (120 RS)) RealTracks in style: ~388:Bass, Electric, Metal Ev 120 RealTracks in song: ~~1030:Guitar, 12-String Electric, Fingerpicking Ev 120 RealDrums in Song: RockClassicBritEv^1-a:Snare, Closed HiHat , b:Snare, Ride Bell ******************* BETWEEN THE LINES 1984/2014 DGA DGA DGA DGA GAD GAD You'll find no one to tell you, they'll say you're doing fine GAD GAD but they won't have to sell you, if you read between the lines GAD GAD Don't ask so many questions, you're talking all the time GAD GAD You'll learn the situation if you read between the lines BmA GD Between the lines, leave your cares behind BmA GD If you want to know the truth, you must read between the lines GAD GAD Your father never told you, but he knew it all the time GAD GAD and Mama doesn't scold you, when you read between the lines GAD GAD a risky situation when you say what's on your mind GAD GAD but you'll find your motivation if you read between the lines BmA GD Between the lines, leave your fears behind BmA GD if you want to know the truth you must read between the lines BmA GD Between the lines, leave your tears behind BmA GA if you want to know the truth you must read DGA DGA break DGA DGA GAD GAD Sometimes you get a reason, sometimes no light will shine GAD GAD but you will find it pleasin', if you read between the lines GAD GAD They often try to cheat you, mistreat you all the time GAD GAD but they can never beat you , if you read between the lines BmA GD Between the lines, leave your cares behind BmA GD if you want to know the truth, you must read between the lines BmA GD Between the lines, leave it all behind BmA GD if you want to know the truth you must read between the lines BmA GA If you want to know the truth you must read DGA between the lines DGA between the lines DGA between the lines DGD read between the lines
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Nice and catchy - I especially like the harmony. Straight forward 1960's feeling tune.
Seems a bit bass heavy to me, and the vocals are a touch subdued. But I think there are better ears on the forum than mine.
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Nice and catchy - I especially like the harmony. Straight forward 1960's feeling tune.
Seems a bit bass heavy to me, and the vocals are a touch subdued. But I think there are better ears on the forum than mine. Noted, I remixed this morning with less bottom and more vocals. I felt the same.
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The mix sounds fine on my KRK's. And typically for me that means a mix will sound good on any other system I play it on.
Like David mentioned it has an authentic mid 60's vibe. Nice hook too.
Enjoyed it.
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Yep... straight up a 60's feel.
Reminded me of the band the Byrds and a few others from that time. Back then, this could have been a hit. It has that harmony going on that was very popular at the time.
A nice blast from the past.
You may or may not be aware that some publishers and especially music libraries look for "New old songs" from time to time. I could see this being used in a movie about the 60's time frame as underscore or source.
Nice work.
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Hello,
nice song; good melody. the arpeggiate guitar plays like in the Byrd style.
Good work.
Hello.
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I like this version a lot better.
You nailed that 60's Byrds and Grassroots sound. Loved it.
This is a keeper.
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Will,
During my first listen I had to get rid of a cold-call salesman at my door, dunno what he was trying to sell me cos I was singing the chorus in my head.
Great 60's vibe
enjoyed a lot
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Well, this may not be the final mix after all, because I just bought a Rickenbacker 12 string and really have to get it on this song. I'm sure you understand.
In terms of the 60's sound, I reject the premise that that sound is dated. This is why I write songs like this, I never got enough of the Byrds, Searchers, Hollies or Badfinger. They didn't exhaust the possibilities of catchy arpeggios and jangly choruses. So I'll keep at it.
Last edited by Will Rockwell; 08/26/15 10:29 AM.
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Hi Will,
Like others said, very catchy, good (backing) vocals.
And it also reminded us of the Byrds, like it did others.
"Turn, turn, turn", that kind of song.
Very nice!
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Yep... straight up a 60's feel.
Reminded me of the band the Byrds and a few others from that time. Back then, this could have been a hit. It has that harmony going on that was very popular at the time.
A nice blast from the past.
You may or may not be aware that some publishers and especially music libraries look for "New old songs" from time to time. I could see this being used in a movie about the 60's time frame as underscore or source.
Nice work. I would like to learn more about publishers looking for retro material
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Like has been stated, nice catchy tune. Great job on the harmonies. Again, captures the feel of the 60's genre. Like you, I still enjoy it!
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Love the catchy intro, love that electric 12 (use it a lot myself), and what is not to like in the song? Catchy, clever, and just a straight up fun listen!! Great job on this, and probably your best vocal I've heard. Take care. Greg
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Thank you for sharing your art with us. This is a wonderful forum for posting original music. Not to mention a great product for creating music.
You have found a suburb community of generous artists who love to listen to, and comment on other artists songs. If only to give feedback to others who are also sharing their art.
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