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Just a little waltz (a bit wordy at 78 words ![grin grin](/forums/images/graemlins/default/grin.gif) ) I've misplaced the original file on this, so no memo. All BIAB with some strings and such added. Comments or crits welcomed. The WAV: https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/the-widows-walkThe MP3: https://soundcloud.com/90-db/the-widows-walkThe Widow's Walk ©2015 Robert Randall Burke Day after day Down by the quay She scans the horizon for canvas A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk. Tell her a tale Of life under sail And she'll tell you one about waiting To hear a ship's bells' Homecoming knells Down on the Widow's Walk. The fog is just lifting As she strains to see Just what her future will be A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk.
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Nicely done, Sir. Strong lyrically, good performance.
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Here are my favorite parts of this, Bob:
Day after day Down by the quay She scans the horizon for canvas A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk.
Tell her a tale Of life under sail And she'll tell you one about waiting To hear a ship's bells' Homecoming knells Down on the Widow's Walk.
The fog is just lifting As she strains to see Just what her future will be A month overdue Soon becomes two Down on The Widow's Walk.
Lyric writing simply does not get tighter than this. Such a WOW-factor. The melody is beautiful, too. The production is perfect for it.
The bar goes up again.
Killer.
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I really like this. I think it is very artistic all the way around. Great sounds, warm, charming, and super lyrics.
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I really love this song. It's got real hit potential in my humble opinion, but quay is pronounced 'key'. That would drive me nuts. Maybe you can change the first sentence to rhyme with key? Anyway love it. Nice voice. Its style reminds me of traditional English folk songs. 'Too close to the Moon' is also really beautiful as well.
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One hell of a tune, yes to echo Floyd, this is some tight writing.
Congrats!
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Bob,
Just beautiful... Great lyrics and outstanding vocal.
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Bob, this is a great one. An economical set of lyrics that needs nothing more. It has the ring of an olde English sea shanty wrapped in a waltz. I love the melody. Bravo! Tom
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Bob Lovely folk feel - very pretty. Nice lyric excellent vocal. (Listened to both versions the guitar sounds much better to me in the uncompressed version.)
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Hey Bob,
This is beautiful. The accompaniment is a great fit and, as floyd has already mentioned, lyric writing doesn't get any tighter than this. You sure know how to make 78 words work for you! This is definitely up there with the best!
Regards, Noel
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Nicely done Bob. A lyric that draws you in powerfully; with a perfect musical setting. Very enjoyable.
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Paul,
Thanks for the kind remarks.I see your father worked with Marty Robbins. I knew his manager years ago.
Regards,
Bob
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fj,
Thanks for listening and the nice comments. Appreciate it.
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Bob
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David,
Thanks. Appreciate the listen.
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Bob
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I really love this song. It's got real hit potential in my humble opinion, but quay is pronounced 'key'. That would drive me nuts. Maybe you can change the first sentence to rhyme with key? Anyway love it. Nice voice. Its style reminds me of traditional English folk songs. 'Too close to the Moon' is also really beautiful as well. lambada, Thanks for the comments. Actually, "quay" has several different pronounciations, if you study it's Etymology. http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/quay"Too Close To The Moon" is a Lawrence Oliver song. Regards, Bob
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Danny,
Thanks for listening and commenting.
Regards,
Bob
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Bob,
Thanks for the kind words. Hope you are well.
Regards,
Bob
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Tommy, My head is full of shanties. Past life maybe? ![grin grin](/forums/images/graemlins/default/grin.gif) thanks for the kind comments. Regards, Bob
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Bob Lovely folk feel - very pretty. Nice lyric excellent vocal. (Listened to both versions the guitar sounds much better to me in the uncompressed version.) Peter, Thanks. That's why I post WAV files in addition to the MP3's. I've had the same experience as you. Regards, Bob
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Noel,
Thanks. Appreciate the kind words.
Regards,
Bob
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John,
Thanks for the listen and comment.
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Bob
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Awesome! Songwriting at it's best ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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Dave,
Thanks for listening and the kind comment.
Regards,
Bob
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Sensational writing Bob, Master-Class for sure, However Floyd nailed it with his response, I couldn't come close.
Tremendous feel, and your melody, vocals and delivery sets the time and place so perfectly.
I need to say it again: "Master Class"
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We liked Tom's description of your tune being a waltz sea shanty.
It's a lovely write. There is much more elegantly stated here in 78 words than many could say in a couple of pages.
And for us it has the "wow quality" as when it's over we just look at each other and smile and think YES!
Most excellent.
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Hi, Bob !
I really loved this most beautiful tune and performance ! I don´t really find the right words for it but it awoke in me a kind of longing to go back to Scotland again ! There was something Scottish in that lovely tune, you know !:))
Great, just great Bob !
Cheers Dani
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Another great one Bob!! You have such a way with these melancholy songs-lyrics have just the right touch of sadness, and are neither too sparse or redundant. And, the music carries it perfectly. Your roll continues!! Take care. Greg
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Paul,
Thanks for the kind remarks.I see your father worked with Marty Robbins. I knew his manager years ago.
Regards,
Bob You're welcome, Bob. I'm a sucker for a good waltz. My uncles, Tompall and the Glaser Brothers worked with Marty back in the late 50's.
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Wonderful and rich. The strings come in at the perfect moment.
Great write and super arrangement.
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Wow Bob.... that was scary good! I like the way you arrange your songs. Truly, you are a music professional.
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Trevor,
Thanks for the kind words.
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J&B, Thanks. I love a sea shanty...Argghhhhh!!!!!!!!!! Regards, Bob
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Dani,
I'm half Scot, so it's in my blood. Thanks for the kind remarks.
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Bob
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Greg,
Thanks for the listen and comments. Appreciate it.
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Lawrence,
Thanks. Love your new one!
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Pat,
Thanks for the kind remarks.
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Good lyrics, beautiful melody, well sung!
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Bob, I enjoyed your clear measured vocal & the images in the lyric - as others have said , there`s not a word wasted... nice that the last verse leaves the outcome of her waiting uncertain. Robert
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Another concise masterpiece. Enjoyed this from start to finish.
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Rob and Anne-Marie,
Thanks for listening and the kind comments.
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Robert,
Thanks. Appreciate the kind remarks.
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Charlie,
Thanks for listening and commenting. Hope you are staying frosty!
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Beautiful song. Love the feel of the waltz. Excellent lyric and vocal
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Scott,
Thanks for listening and commenting.
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