Hello, Alyn
The melody lines made with the isomorphic iteration of phrasing are very beautiful.
The lyrics are heartbreaking and painful.
I do love the lyrics.
And your vocal that reminds John Lennon a little bit is very fitted with this tune.
Very enjoyed the listen.
Best Regards.
Shigeki Adachi
Shigeki,
thank you so much for your lovely comments especially
the isomorphic iteration of phrasing
THAT is an outstanding phrase, I have GOT to use that in a song somehow!
thanks for the Lennon reference, he is still a musical hero of mine.
take care, Sir, and keep producing YOUR masterpieces
Alyn