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Fall Apart https://soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel/fall-apartBy David Snyder V1 When you’re gone I wish that you were here I want to hold you near And I dream about your face And when you’re here I dream about the world And what it could be girl If we could find our place Pre-Chorus: And I know That love is just a word That’s said but seldom heard But I sing it anyway CH And what if no one is to blame And what if we could make a brand new start Then nothing in this world, nothing Could make us fall apart V2 When I dream You’re holding out your hands Running on the sand Towards a better day And when I wake I pray for second sight And I hope I'll see a light That will help me find my way Pre Chorus x 2 Chorus 2: And what if no one is to blame And what if we could love with all our hearts Then nothing in this world, nothing Could make us fall apart Nothing in this world Nothing in this world Nothing in this world Nothing in this world Nothing in this world Could make us fall apart Words and Music David Snyder copyright 2017 ASCAP/Day of Faith Records All music produced, engineered and mixed by David Snyder ****** Song Summary ************* Title: Fall Apart Style is _DANCERK.STY (Modern Dance Pop-Rock ) Vocals and additional instrumentation: David Snyder RealTracks in style: ~388:Bass, Electric, Metal Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 1749:Synth, Rhythm ModernDancePopOctave16thsA-B Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 629:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopAmericanDirty Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 1744:Synth, Rhythm ModernDancePopRaveDrops Ev 120 RealDrums in style: ModernDancePop^16-a:Snare, Bass , b:Bass, Cymbal *******************
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Cool tune David. Very neat backtrack. You have some very cool stuff going on their. Acoustic during the intro got my attention right away. Super vocal and lyric. Harmonies were super as well....
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David, This is another well written tune. Very good sounding mix. I really loved the pre-chorus. For me that made the song. Enjoyed, Tom
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This. Is. EXCELLENT.
An excellent Pop Rock write. Catchy start to finish (not an easy task). The build (as Tom mentioned) is outstanding - then the chorus keeps it going and doesn't let up. Verses hold the ear, too. And a nice lyric that holds up throughout...
The BAND is well put together. The perfect energy. Excellent vocal to go with that.
One of your very best. A hit.
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Hi David,
So much energy!!! This is high octane songwriting and song-performing! Definitely one to be proud of. I really like the rhyme schemes you've used. They work perfectly and drive the lyrics powerfully!
It's definitely thumbs up from me... two to them!
All the best, Noel
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David, A great groove and a fine message. Should be featured at raves across the world. The highlight for me is the energy you bring... and that note you hit on the chorus. Very well done.
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Wow David - I thoroughly enjoyed this! The song itself is incredible, but the lyrics behind bring it to a whole different level. The vocal delivery is superb! Great job, and thanks so much for sharing
Cheers, Deryk
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Nice. This has a great vibe from start to finish. It's a good fit for today's pop sound.
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As noted "energetic" seems to be a very good descriptor for this catchy song. Nicely produced and written.
Peter
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Awesome song!
great lyrics, strong ,uplifting, powerful
massive energy
so good!
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Well done David! Quite different to what you usually write! Quite fond of the vocals and piano. Great work!
Cheers, Joe
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Another excellent song. Great lyrics and performance.
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Hey thanks Scott!! I appreciate the feedback. O am glad you liked it!!
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Thanks Tommy! I think the pre chorus might be my favorite part too. Been enjoying your new songs as well!
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Thanks Floyd buddy! That really means a lot coming from you!!
Glad you liked it.
By the way I LOVED your last song that you wrote for your wife. Amazing!!!!!!
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Hi David,
Well upon first listen we thought this song would be a very nice and tranquilizing one. Until... you started singing with your usual high-energy! Which was also cool ;-) Needless to say that this was another winner!
Rob & Anne-Marie
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Thanks Noel! I am glad you liked the rhyme schemes! I gave them a lot of thought. Well, kind of....
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Thanks Robert! Raves across the world!!! That would be nice!!! Say a prayer!! That high note in the chorus note was a high F# falsetto, over top of a D then D7sus. Not quite sure how I hit that but I have been noticing this very odd coincidence that the more you practice, the more your vocals chords stretch out. Hmmmmm. I got to a high G# (non falsetto) on the third chorus after the key change in Take Me Along. Only one more half step and I will be able to say I have the tenor range covered. But, it will be a long half step. I start to crack at G#. Maybe next year.
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David, this one puts me in mind of some early eighties Springsteen. Nice little subtle background touches here and there. Great overall feel! Thanks, T
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Thanks Deryk, I always appreciate your comments so much. You are very kind. Glad you liked it!!
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hi david great job on this vocal mix love the progression awesome work thanks eric
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Hey thanks so much Charlie! I really appreciate that!! So glad you liked it! Thanks for stopping by!!
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Always good David Rob
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Hi Thanks Peter! I am glad you enjoyed it.
I have been enjoying your string of hits for sure!
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Thanks Kenny! I have said many times, you sure have been cranking out the hits and I have been enjoying them all!
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Thanks Joe! I really appreciate that! I though the piano gave it a little extra kick there. Thanks for stopping by man!!
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Hi David,
I'm really late getting this to this. Di's having numerous health issues.
Anyway, glad I got over to this. Non-stop energy! Great lyric and super production! Your music is always a treat. Totally loved it! This is a really cool song.
Have great weekend,
Alan
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Hello, David
Very catchy and very pop! As Noel said, "So much energy!!! This is high octane songwriting and song-performing! Definitely one to be proud of." The riffs hidden in the chord progression are very wonderful. The ending reminds me of The Beatles a little bit. Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
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Thanks Sergio! That means a lot coming from you!! I am really glad you liked it!!
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Hey Rob and Annie-Marie, thanks so much!! I have been trying to tame my energy this year but so far no luck. Maybe next year!! Thanks for listening! I am glad you liked it!!
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It's got tons of energy! The song reminds me of Springsteen - Da Boss
love the instruments you chose!
Great song!
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Thanks Torrey! I'll take the Bruce reference. Thanks for the listen!!
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Hey F.M. M.
Thanks man! Loved your guitar work on the Last Frontier.
You must tell me how you got that tone!!
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David,
Back for another listen. Love what you've done with this. Needed another Snyder-fix!
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Thanks Rob! I appreciate that! I sure have been enjoying all of your hits this summer!!
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I always enjoy listening to your songs, David. This one had an extreme depth to it that to it that I had not initially expected when I heard the intro. Lovely, lovely job!
Cheers, Ember
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Thanks Al and Di! I really appreciate that. Hope things are going better. You are always in my prayers. Thanks for stopping by!
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Late to the party on this, sorry!
This is great, man! Yeah, I'm hearing shades of the boss in this one too.
BTW, love your soundcloud profile pic!
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Well, we're later to the party than Dave. Man, this place has been BUSY lately. Your hallmarks of a fine write and production are here...but, wow, as so many have mentioned the energy is over the top. This one has film score written all over it. Janice is describing all kinds of imagery to me as I type And at the risk of redundancy the "Boss Feel" is definitely there! Enjoyed the listen... J&B
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Thanks Al and Di!
Glad you came back for a second listen!
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Dear Shigeki,
Thanks so much. You know if you mention the Beatles you will get me excited!
Thanks so much for the generous words. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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It's got tons of energy! The song reminds me of Springsteen - Da Boss
love the instruments you chose!
Great song! Lawrence got it!! Great song, great energy, great band. Everything works!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks Gruverider. I really appreciate that. I am so glad you enjoyed it!!
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Thanks for coming back for another listen Al and Di! Hope you guys are doing better!
I sure have been enjoying your songs.
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Great song David, I really appreciate you sharing this with all of us. Great Job!
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Thank you Ember! That was a very lovely comment. I am so glad you enjoyed the song. Thanks for a great product to work with!!
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Thanks Dave. I really appreciate that man!!
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Thanks Janice and Bud! That really means a lot. It made my day!! I an so glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you Tyler! I am really glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks a million!
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