Mr jane, welcome to the forums!

For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done.

The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store?

At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)

Last edited by HearToLearn; 04/26/18 07:33 AM.
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