Originally Posted By: Noel96
You've done a great job writing and presenting this. Everything sits together very well in my headphones as I'm listening this morning.

I found the overall sound very haunting. Even now, 10 minutes after the song has stopped playing, I can still here the chorus in my mind. It's easy to hear that a lot of careful consideration has gone into creating the final production.

I really like how you sang "Say goodbye to love" followed immediately by a repetition of the phrase with a slightly altered syllabic emphasis. That's a pretty advanced lyric writing technique and you've used it very well indeed!

All the best with the competition,
Noel


Thanks Noel, I always appreciate your positive feedback laugh I'm glad you noticed that altered emphasis. Originally (in my dream) the same emphasis was used twice, but I wanted to give it some variation and to avoid possible copying of some other song melody. But whatever you write, it always feels like it has been done before smile

Janne

Hear My Music:

Soundcloud
YouTube