Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Robert,

Very nice retirement dream!
Wonderful song!
Your vocal is very hunting.
It is certainly dissonant a little bit as music theory, but bouzouki and the other additional loops are very comfortable.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Shigeki,

I`m glad you enjoyed my musical retirement dream!

Robert

Originally Posted By: Deej56
Robertkc,

Really like your vocal on this—subdued but compelling; and an inviting melody. Poetic and engaging lyrics—love the “time for all the nothing I want” line, notwithstanding the opinion of a ten year old, who likely knows better than all of us! From a production standpoint—and this is totally subjective—I’d like to hear this a little cleaner, sans some of the effect you have going on. Just something to thing about—use or lose.

Really liked my listen here. Well done!

Kind regards,

Deej


Thank you, Deej.
I get why you`d find some arrangement effects not to your taste. I could have done it much simpler... but since living in SE Asia I`ve had this bug about trying to do East meets West, so had to get it out of my system.
I appreciate your listen and comments.

Robert