Excellent!! ++on all aspects: composition, performance, production, concept, etc., etc.!
I especially liked the step-wise base line (over diminished chord, I think) that you used, as well as slight minor movements in the verse melody, with some suspended notes that resolved so interestingly.

You are a one-man band, Torrey! No need to apologize for any of the playing..

This is a great example of having a clear concept in mind, then not being able to 'sift' through the BIAB elements to find the right accompaniment to match your concept--you have to built it nearly all yourself, but what a great reward for doing that!

Touching and unmatchable testimony to your friend..you are 'crossing the great divide' with your message!

Tom