Originally Posted By: Will Josef
I think it sounds like a finished song and I really like it. It is a very nice chord progression and there's a good overall dynamic between your voice and the instruments. It wouldn't have hurt if you had continued with the line "You're Looking For A World" a few times more towards the end of the song, because it is a great groove... smile Very good job and I'm glad that you chose to share it with us.


Howdy Will...(link fixed in original post...I'm an idiot)

Thanks for chiming in and the kind words.
I know my material is not in the main stream here so I appreciate the listen and commenting.

Funny you say that....I took out two of the "Looking for a world" phrases last night just before I exported to MP3 because I thought I was overstating the lyrical motif.
Plus, I thought it would allow more focus on the lead guitar part.
The 'groove' worked well according to my aural receptors too....I got lucky. smile

Thanks again Will....




Last edited by chulaivet1966; 02/03/19 12:49 PM.